Wow thses look like a commercial ad campaign for something. I prefer the second image (the one with the lady in front of the building) because I feel that it looks more compositionaly thought out. - BP Reed
thats what it looks like to me as well but the third for now is the strongest conceptually, though i'd like to see how the second can be push farther cuz its very close to a finish pieced. by the way love the perspective play in all of this.
wondering what the concept is behind these pieces. I like the 3d aspect of it and the seamless merging of the image and the building. I'm wondering what you can do to push it further.
I appreciate how you were able to seamlessly merge the female forms with the building. I like how in the very top image, the dark spaces of the rectangular windows creates a structure and conceals facial features of the figure from the viewer. but generally, I think that the image that is the third from the bottom is compositionally the strongest.
i think that the first and third are my favorite. i like how you are playing with the images wrapping around the building. i think that you are doing a good job keeping the perspective. I am curious with the concept but i think the images are working well.
The first has the most going for it in my opinion. One thing I would change is the high contrast of the girl on the sculpture. If she was a more earthy tone, that almost faded away, it would further the image I think. Also, it might add some more interest to have some sort of glow coming out of the holes in the sculpture, almost as pores in skin.
The 2nd from the bottom is my favorite. the shoe takes you into the girls face on the side of the building, and then you follow to the other side of the building un into this figure shielding her eyes. Your color choice for the image is strong and cohesive. I do not have anything negative to say, your directional forces are so strong in this image, and you have done a very convincing job of wrapping them to the buildings
I agree that these look like an ad campaign (especially the first one), i'm curious as to what the narrative is. The technique is very nice though, a good use of the perspective tool.
Wow thses look like a commercial ad campaign for something. I prefer the second image (the one with the lady in front of the building) because I feel that it looks more compositionaly thought out. - BP Reed
ReplyDeletethats what it looks like to me as well but the third for now is the strongest conceptually, though i'd like to see how the second can be push farther cuz its very close to a finish pieced. by the way love the perspective play in all of this.
ReplyDeletewondering what the concept is behind these pieces. I like the 3d aspect of it and the seamless merging of the image and the building. I'm wondering what you can do to push it further.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate how you were able to seamlessly merge the female forms with the building. I like how in the very top image, the dark spaces of the rectangular windows creates a structure and conceals facial features of the figure from the viewer. but generally, I think that the image that is the third from the bottom is compositionally the strongest.
ReplyDeletei think that the first and third are my favorite. i like how you are playing with the images wrapping around the building. i think that you are doing a good job keeping the perspective. I am curious with the concept but i think the images are working well.
ReplyDeleteThe first has the most going for it in my opinion. One thing I would change is the high contrast of the girl on the sculpture. If she was a more earthy tone, that almost faded away, it would further the image I think. Also, it might add some more interest to have some sort of glow coming out of the holes in the sculpture, almost as pores in skin.
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd from the bottom is my favorite. the shoe takes you into the girls face on the side of the building, and then you follow to the other side of the building un into this figure shielding her eyes. Your color choice for the image is strong and cohesive. I do not have anything negative to say, your directional forces are so strong in this image, and you have done a very convincing job of wrapping them to the buildings
ReplyDeleteI agree that these look like an ad campaign (especially the first one), i'm curious as to what the narrative is. The technique is very nice though, a good use of the perspective tool.
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